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[ CRITIQUES ] :: { idea taken from [ profile] shunsheng }

([personal profile] byakuran Jul. 8th, 2008 11:59 pm)
Eh, I'm basically only human, which means I'm liable to make some mistakes on characterization. Especially if it's the first time I'm playing said character. This is why posts like this exist. Feel free to comment & critique me on my interpretation of Byakuran; I'll do my best to listen & take in any advice you might have for me.

Anonymous comments are allowed. Flames are a no go unless they come in the form of red hots. Because, y'know, we're all mature people here. Amirite or amirite?

Hee hee, I said come.

From: [identity profile]

Is "you're a sexy beast" crit? 'cos I feel it needs to be said~.

From: [identity profile]

Pffft. See, it'll make me sound like a loser if I say I stalk Byakuran, now.

From: [personal profile] pussyfortono

Dude, Byakuran will totally stalk back; he's bossman of the white spell & they're all stalkers at heart.

Among other things.

From: [identity profile]

I'll believe it. Mukuro is having quite the conversation with Glo, speaking of 'other things'.

From: [personal profile] pussyfortono

Oh, Glo. He's like an advertisement for badtouch.

GLO XINIA: One & only member of the White spell who's got an arsenal of tentacles to back him up. For four easy payments of Chrome Dokuro, you too can enjoy the benefits of Glo Xinia's hobby.

Riding crop included.

Batteries not.

From: [identity profile]

Well, if there's no batteries I feel a bit cheated.

(Also, where does the owl fit in then?)

From: [personal profile] pussyfortono

White Spell needs to make a profit somehow, amirite?

1. pedo molestations
2. ???
3. profit!

( the owl's kind of like a loose variable; sometimes it's there & sometimes it's not. like ketchup in your burger, or the missing pickle they never let you have )

From: [identity profile]

For the longest time I thought the uniform included shouta shorts and that would have solved your profit problems like that.

From: [personal profile] pussyfortono

I WISH. Sadly, the most we can do is make the Cervello dress in skimpy white bikinis during the summer.

& sell batteries.


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