[ CRITIQUES ] :: { idea taken from shunsheng }

[byakuran]

Eh, I'm basically only human, which means I'm liable to make some mistakes on characterization. Especially if it's the first time I'm playing said character. This is why posts like this exist. Feel free to comment & critique me on my interpretation of Byakuran; I'll do my best to listen & take in any advice you might have for me.

Anonymous comments are allowed. Flames are a no go unless they come in the form of red hots. Because, y'know, we're all mature people here. Amirite or amirite?

Hee hee, I said come.